Nice as far as the animation goes. My only real complaint is the font. Something abit more suited to the animation would have been nice
Nice as far as the animation goes. My only real complaint is the font. Something abit more suited to the animation would have been nice
like?
WTF Learn to spell
LEARN TO SPELL. YOU LOOK LIKE AN IDIOT NOW.
Okay, mom.
I'll take another school year =(
Fix your BGs
Don't use bitmaps, actually draw them
Yeah, I was trying something new this time around, trying to mimic Archer a little bit. They did turn out a little blurry in the end though. Im MAYBE going to try one more time with this style as its time efficient (and looks better than my normal backgrounds lol) but it may not last.
Predictable
It was ok, but I knew he'd find something like a pump and pump out fire or something. I spent at least a minute waiting for him to be burned to a crisp, so I was not surprised when it was pretzels he pumped.
Good job on the animation, but the joke sucked.
Fire is very different from pretzels, but I see how you could make the mistake of confusing the two. I too often confuse burning, hot fire with delicious, salty pretzels. There was this one time where I had a hankerin' for pretzels, so I went to my kitchen to eat some pretzels only to accidentally eat fire! I thought, DARNIT, not again! The fire tasted pretty good, though, so I kept eating it.
Good, but lacking in mastery.
The Idea was nice but you overdid it. It could also have used more action in rave scenes, and your music could have been transitioned better. the plot could use an overhaul as well.
Said the 13 year old...
Excellent
This is great. The animation style reminds me of Family Guy, the voice, in particular, reminds me of Joe. Either way, great movie. One suggestion, on the baby wave encore, have the bit where the dad grabs fistfuls of babies.
Very XTREME
Thanks! I was thinking of adding Dad's victory jump, but for some reason the Baby Wave seemed to have a calling of its own.
Cool Mix
Ive never thought of a Halloween-Valentines day thing before
Haha yeah, I guess that was kind of just how it ended up working out.... but hey if you're into that, look up "ghost crush" on NG, thats totally a Hallowe'en/Valentines' Day story
Very Nice
Charachter and bird need improvement
haha you're right
I forgot about the bird when I was touching it up
hopefully people wont be too bothered.
Nice, But A Little Choppy
I understand that you had only 11 days to complete this, but part 2 was a little choppy, also, voices would have been nice
Yeah, I agree it needs work :) Thanks for watching it!
Perfect If It Had A Once Over
Great, but you should go over spelling ect. in the subtitles. Also the gallery controls are reversed, which kind of bugged me.
yeah, we intend to make it reverb... i guess it dint work out for u.. sry!
and ty for ur time!
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